Reflection on Unit 3: Thesis Proposal Development
In this blog, I reflect on what I learned throughout Unit 3 and how I developed my thesis proposal during this period. In Unit 2, I first learned the basic structure of a thesis proposal and what should be considered when writing it. I also studied how each section should be organised and what kind of academic thinking is required. Based on this foundation, I reviewed my learning from Week 1 to Week 9 and organised my progress, focusing on how I approached each stage of the writing process.
During the development of my thesis proposal, I also had several one on one feedback sessions with my tutor. These discussions were extremely valuable for helping me understand the weaknesses in my work and what point should be improved. For example, I realised that my topic was too broad and needed to be more focused and narrow down precisely. I also receieved that there were two main themes in my research such as educational animation and visual metaphor at the bigging od stage, and that I should narrow it down to one clear direction. From this advice, I changed my theme and focus on educational animation instead of visual metaphor. In addition, I received important feedback regarding my literature review, particularly that I needed to include more academic sources to better support my arguments. And he advised to improve my referencing style, including consistency in my reference list and correct formatting, such as the use of italics when citing films.
Through this feedback, I realised that my academic writing still needs further development. In particular, I understood the importance of building a stronger literature base and supporting my ideas with more reliable academic sources. I also learned that clarity and simplicity are essential in academic writing. precise and focused topic helps the reader understand the argument more easily, and prevents the writing from becoming confusing or too broad.
In next step, I plan to carefully reflect on these points during the summer break. I will read more academic literature and continue improving my understanding of the topic. I also want to regularly revise and refine my writing by receiving feedback from others. At this stage, the content of my chapters is still developing, but I aim to strengthen both the theoretical and practical aspects of my research.
In the future, I hope to combine academic research with more practical exploration, so that my thesis becomes not only theoretically strong but also meaningful in practice. Overall, this unit has helped me understand the importance of structure, focus, and continuous improvement in academic research.
